I recently bought a boombox for my mother to play and record cassette tapes. I didn't realize at the time that the boom box did not have a built in microphone. I then bought a condenser microphone for her and plugged it into the audio in jack. It failed to work. I tested the microphone on my computer and I tested the audio in jack with my cell phone. Both worked. I thought the problem may lie in the strength of the signal from the unpowered microphone. So I built a pre-amp circuit modeled after the one in the old lab manual "A First Lab in Cuicuits and Electronics" by Yannis Tsividis.
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I'm an amateur when it comes to electronics, where am I going wrong?