Thank you Vladimir - I have I believe corrected the microphone element of the circuit but it is still not working.
I've attached a fresh circuit diagram.
I've added an LED to detect when the circuit is working. And a microphone to provide input. (Following advice today I've added a 2.4K resistor between mic and +6V, and changed the connections.) I've used my phone to provide a sound frequency to the microphone. And attempted to tune the circuit using the potentiometer, but the circuit does not appear to be working. When the microphone is not connected, the LED lights up.
Some advice about getting an output or an alternative input would be useful. Thank you very much. This is the microphone I've used: https://www.rapidonline.com/r-tech-350095-omni-directional-pcb-mount-microphone-6mm-35-0095